Babylon's Ashes by
James S.A. Corey
My rating:
3 of 5 stars
It's honestly not what I expected. With this novel basically being "Nemesis Games Part 2", I had high hopes this novel would bring its A game. Instead, it brings its OK game. Not bad in any real way but fails only slightly fewer ways than it succeeds.
I think its biggest problem is that the narrative is all over the place. The previous novels did an excellent job keeping a tight control on their structure, but Ashes tends to reach for things to talk about. We end up getting scenes and long stretches of reflective perspective that have little to no impact on the overall story. For example, Prax gets the fifth degree over some leaked information. While the scene itself is well written, there is little progress in what is happening with the rather high-stakes war that is currently evolving. To be fair, a lot is going on across the solar system, but we get entire scenes of characters thinking to themselves when any information their scenes have could have been relayed through a footnote. We have meetings when it could have just been an email.
Also, Marco isn't a strong villain. He's shallow, not overly bright, and honestly easily undermined by even the slightest hiccup in his plans. This seems to be done mostly on purpose, but I still would have preferred someone who felt like a worthy opponent. Though, as much as Holden relied on coincidence and plot armor, a smarter villain might have won.
Prose and characters are still a strong aspect of the series. Nothing to lose your shit over, but there's a fair amount of polish on everything. Pa is an interesting character but is defined by their relation to the plot more than anything else. While there are a lot of natural elements between Pa and Holden that practically write themselves, the focus should have been to make Pa more of a counterweight to Holden. It further highlights how the issues with the Expanse on more with the marco rather than the micro. It's probably why I liked Nemesis Games so much as both sides of those elements came together.
With six books down and three to go, I don't see any reason to stop reading. I'm not as involved with the story as I probably should be by this point, but I'm still mostly enjoying myself. There just seems to be some familiar patterns in how the novels develop that fail to provide the originality a long-form story needs. We'll see how this changes, if at all, as this series enters its endgame arc.
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